Lucky part thirteen today. Starting to wrap this up.
Over at the LiveJournal, David Yoder suggested I collect this in a physical format as a mini, something that has crossed my mind. There is a kind of charm to this story and it presentation on the blog. I'm not sure the ad hoc process of creating this makes for a cohesive work. It's been fun trying to keep the continuity going one installment at a time, but looking over it I'm not so sure it works as a whole.
Another idea is fixing the errors and redrawing the whole thing. I think I'd be more satisfied with the end result there - it'd certainly have more polish - but is it worth the time it'd take to redo it?
I'll decide when the things all done, but I'm curious as to what anyone else thinks.
Any ideas?
2 comments:
Personally, if you're going to go to the trouble of redrawing, take the time to polish the pacing. At this point, in spaced out chunks the pacing works okay, but I think it would really drag with all the pages one after the other.
I've definitely fallen into the installment writing trap. If I do decide to re-draw, that's one of the things I'd change.
Between you and me (and, you know, anybody else reading this) I actually have some pretty extensive revisions in mind.
I'll finish here and then decide (so much to do already)
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