Sunday, April 13, 2008

! - page eighteen



For those of you who are interested, I've cobbled together a rough "story so far..." page at my site. I just threw everything in as is so some of the pages don't line up and the images aren't scaled down at all - which makes it a little tall for most browsers.
As I get nearer to completion I'll try and tighten up the presentation a bit, but this gives you sort of an idea of the overall scope.
enjoy...

3 comments:

DerikB said...

Wow, looks great all layed out like that. It's much easier to follow the larger designs/layouts (like how huge that mountain/hill is behind all the other characters and the contrasting small insets that show it as a whole.

grant said...

yes, much better in a row. I could appreciate the subway scene more. I like how their geographic location is mimicked by the page placement. (Like when she gets on subway and the panels move down lower on the page>)

Tymmi said...

Yeah, I wanted to play with the correlation of page space to story space in a way that I've not really seen a whole lot. It really does come across better when you see the whole picture (so to speak.)

I figured all along that all-at-once is really the best way to read this thing. I've got some clean up and a little redrawing to do but I like the way this is turning out so far.